The following articulates what you need to do to include your supporting
quotes in the text of an essay.
For a look at the power point we
used to introduce the material,
click here.
Three ways to write a
quote into your text:
- Set up the quote and
then present it as proof of what you have just said. That is, say
something about the quote and then present it like it’s a video or
an object you’re putting on display.
- Type of
punctuation: In this case, you’ll use a colon to introduce
the quote.
- Example:
The crew feasted on Helios’ cattle with relish: “Now six full
days my gallant crew could feast / upon the prime beef they had
marked for slaughter” (929-930).
i.
Note that the phrase before the quote
could stand on its own as a sentence.
ii.
We’ll discuss the punctuation later.
- You can mold the
author’s words in as if they are your own. In this case, you’ll
probably be summarizing or paraphrasing the story and at some point
decide that the writer’s words are better than yours.
- Type of
punctuation: When you do this, you will not use any
punctuation before the quote.
- Example:
After Odysseus’ men were killed, he was left alone on the sea
and began floating “north again, / straight for Charybdis”
(965-966).
i.
Note that if I took away the quotation
marks, the sentence would flow just like I had written it. That’s when
you know you don’t need punctuation.
ii.
Your quotes can be little like this
too, as long as they have the information you need.
- You can introduce
the quote with an introductory phrase that leads into the author’s
phrasing. This will feel like you are writing a piece of dialog for
a story.
- Type of
punctuation: You will use a comma after your introductory
phrase or at the end of the quotation if it leads into another
phrase within the sentence.
- Example:
i.
When Odysseus killed Antinous, the
suitors cried out, “Foul! to shoot at a man! That was your last shot!”
(1432).
ii.
“Let me bring you a shield and spear,”
offers Telemachos to his battling father (1506).
Punctuating a
quotation from poetry:
- Reference lines in
parentheses, but do not write down “p.” or any other
abbreviation.
- Periods:
Periods go OUTSIDE the quotation marks, “after the line reference”
(32).
- We won’t worry about
the line breaks during this unit – we’ll do that during Romeo and
Juliet, but you can see what I’ve done in the examples above.
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